复盘原则:做不到全盘吸收,抓取自己最需要的知识点。
一.文章结构和框架
不管是写文章还是读文章,都要先关注这么几个要素:标题,摘要,首尾段,以及每段主题句。
从我的学习经历来看,这个逻辑在雅思托福的文章很适用,这次课程也证明了这个思路也适用于个人的英文写作。
此外,写文章思路并不是线性的,思考和思路总是需要整理,有一个过程,才最终呈现出一个线性的段落。
需要背诵的主题句
1)Luckin comes prepared.
2)What truly sets Luckin apart from Starbucks is its delivery-focused approach.
3)Luckin’s genes vary entirely from Lyan’s as well as Starbucks’.
4)Luckin’s growing fan base is thanks also to its careful pick of spokespeople.
二. 句子的创作
当我们确定了一个句子要表达的意思之后,为了让句子更出彩,可以问自己2个问题:
1. 怎么写会更有趣,更好玩?
文章中很多词汇的选择都是斟酌过的。比如, viral & rival ;picky & pick;speed & scale 等。 大声读出来,用耳朵写句子。比如文章最后一段的遣词造句,读起来很悦耳。
这个目标更高阶,需要长期积累才能有灵感迸发。目前不是我的重心。
2. 如何调动自己的消极词汇,把认识但在冬眠的词变成自己能准确使用的积极词汇?
这一点是我这一年的重心。阅读文章中认识的词不少,但是写起文章来,能够调兵遣将的词汇少得可怜。
懒人如我的解决方法:内化很多常见词汇的灵活运用。珍惜每日一练的单词训练。
本篇文章中,我需要转换为积极词汇的名单:
动词
-Its 344 stores dotted 13 cities,with Beijing topping the list.
(“有”: scatter,spread,distribute)
-…position itself first as a coffee delivery brand.
-U automatically qualify for a free redeem card on Luckin.
-Characterize
-Monetize
-Last
-Outcompete
-X ensures a persistently referral rate.
-(picutred)— 如图所示
-Roll out(launch)its own coffee brand.
-Justify… 值(得)…
名词
-wave:1. make waves 2. feel a wave of
-the uncontested go-to spot
-burn rate
-hallmark
-user acquisition and store additions
形容词
-A is comparable to B
-drinkbale coffee
-pricy
-picky about quality/ picky eater
-award-winning actors
-likable actors
-premature (+ly)
-delivery-focused approach
-its stated/intended/ goal ;
expressed will
副词 well
-the real cost may well be between 18-25. (表 很有可能)
口语表达
-Uncontested go-to spot
-Spokespeople
-Invite link
-Niche market
-premium membership card
-High-class club
-(Heavy) coffee drinkers
- caffeine-dependent
-Coffee enthusiasts
-Starbucks goers/users-(loyal) fans
-Luckin lovers
-Picky customers
-Referral rate
-Nationwide-statewide-citywide
-Through and through
-..., all sign of high caliber.
-Fill the void
-grow by word of mouth
-Fans were said to be lukewarm about it.
-A day doesn’t really start until I
drink an Americano.
关于写句子的几点新认识:
1. 一句话的黄金位子是头+尾
以前我只注意到了头,这次被提醒了:尾。终于明白了这种句式的用意:
例句:Today,however,a less familiar name may come up more often as it is barging into the coffee retail market in China:Luckin.
2. 短句的力量:强调和概述。
几个段落中间的漂亮的短句
1)It boasts three major highlights.
2)Freshness serves a similar purpose.
3)Fans were said to be luckwarm about it.
4)only time will tell.
本次课在最后的讨论环节,有位朋友提出来副词的问题,感觉受益很大,刷新了我的认知。以前总以为要积累和运用副词来限定动作和程度状况,
这次明白了:努力的方向应该是更精准地使用具体的Verb。比如,用yell 代替 shout loudly.
复盘第一篇。愿我这一年 能有始有终。