声明
因英语不好而丢了脸(详情请看我2月15日的文章《关于英文写作刻意练习》)
故此文是练习英语用的
所以文中含有较多错误
感谢您的指正……
上一篇文章Friendship Lasts Forever存在的问题,感谢我的校友王荧老师指出:
原句:He had to leave the place which he lived for 15 years
修正:He had to leave the place where he lived for 15 years
原因:表示地方关系代词
原句:turn to the left at the first cross
修正:turn to the left at the first crossroads
原因:十字路口
原句:it is the house you are looking forward
修正:it is the house you are looking for
原因:寻找
原句:The whole house filled with laughter
修正:The whole house was filled with laughter
原因:be filled with
原句:Nothing has changed, their friendships last forever.
修正:Nothing has changed. Their friendships last forever.
原因:前后为完整的句子
今日练习:看图作文(请原谅这诡异的画风,我选资料时没有注意。)
Fine Feathers Make Fine Birds
Last Sunday, it was Mary's 18th birthday. So, Mary's mother decided to buy a new dress for Mary as her birthday gift.
After lunch, in the afternoon. Mary and her mother went to the clothing store. The clothing store was very big and various. It was an Italian brand named LORO PIANA.
Mary wanted a pink dress, so she told the shop assistant to show her some pink dresses. The shop assistant quickly found out a dress for Mary.
Mary tried on the dress in the fitting room. Uh-oh, the dress was a little bit large. Although it was beautiful and cheap, Mary didn't choose it.
Then the shop assistant found out another dress for Mary. This one was beautiful, too. Mary liked it very much. However, it was quite expensive.
Mary's mother said to Mary:"Fine feathers make fine birds, it's your birthday gift, just choose the one you really like, my sweetheart."
So Mary tried on the second dress in the fitting room. Ah-ha, this dress was just right ! Mary was very excited. She chose the second dress as her birthday gift at last.
Mary was glad to have such a nice birthday gift.
中文:
人靠衣装
上周日是Mary的18岁生日。所以她的妈妈打算买一件新的连衣裙给Mary当作生日礼物。
午饭过后,到了下午。Mary和她的妈妈去了服装店。这家服装店非常大并且品类多样,它是一个意大利品牌,叫作LORO PIANA(诺悠翩雅)。
Mary想要一件粉色连衣裙,所以她让店员向她展示一些粉色连衣裙。店员很快给Mary找出了一件。
Mary在试衣间里试穿了一下这件连衣裙。啊哦,这件连衣裙有点大,尽管它既好看又便宜,Mary还是没有选择它。
于是店员又给Mary找了另外一件连衣裙。这一件同样很好看,Mary非常中意。然而,它价格不菲。
Mary的妈妈对Mary说:“人靠衣装,这是你的生日礼物,选择你真正喜欢的那个吧,我的宝贝儿。”
所以Mary在试衣间试穿了一下第二件连衣裙。啊哈,这件穿起来刚刚好!Mary非常激动,她最终选择了第二件连衣裙作为她的生日礼物。
Mary很开心能拥有这样一件精美的生日礼物。