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Great job! It is always a good habit to practice things that you care about.
English for say in our case, I notice that you have done your work with a lot of subjective statement which means you lacking of certain descriptive entity other than simple statement. By that i mean you may want to try some compound sentences or making the your note more close to natural language form.

宣雄民 评论自I need to make a choice and give up something l like

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说真的，开始看你的文章就觉得，作者好棒，能把自己的想法都用英文表达出来，我都读懂了。如果是我要用英文来写这么一篇，可能自己能直接写出来的太少了，很有可能都要用翻译软件帮忙，才明白句子该这么写，虽然翻译出来的可能是中式的。我现在的程度可能还只够多看多读吧。然后每条评论我也有看，我发现也能学到很多。也觉得，犯错不可怕，就怕不敢说，不敢写，不敢不面对自己的不足，作者棒棒哒，我想关注，向你学习

I have a try to write in English every day🙈🙈

I want to write something with English, maybe there are some wrong in spelling or gramm...

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